Ganalea

Book 1: The Caronn Invasion

Thorn, a seer of Dreams and Fighter, Cheif of the Neskof Opposition Unit, teams with Ganalea, Leader of Caronn, with Kascar, Vartellaya, and many others, in an attempt to free Melrija from Caronn's iron fist. However, the Opposition are not the only ones to fight Caronn, for both the Archangels Rikaa and Saitsu feel it's their divine right to intervene...

This is MY fictional story! Don't take the work I've done, and say you did it. If you must, e-mail me and say: "Ice Bereaver, I have to write a creative writing thing for English, can I borrow this?" I guarentee you that I will say yes (unless you're suni, mo or moni). Just as long as YOU acknowledge that this is mine. If you want to link to my site, no permission needed. I'm still making a graphic that you can take to link to this. Any exerpts taken or what not (as if you'd want it...hahaha!!!) you must ask for, the link's below. If you are too lazy, you don't need to write in full sentences, but a request is needed.

The purpose of this paragraph is for people using google or some other search engine to find my story: fantasy, story, action, adventure, um...can I think of anything else? Would the word "sex" attract people to my page? Who knows...probably...

7/20/03: The Prologue is up, however it IS subject to change, and I will let you know if I do change it. - Ice Bereaver

7/21/03: Chapter 1 is up too, now. There are MANY flaws with it, and ALL critiques are welcome. If you e-mail me, put "Ganalea" in the subject. Chapter 2 is in the process of being written, and hopefully should be done by either this Friday, or next! Until then! - Ice Bereaver

7/26/03: Ok...I started on Chapter 2, but then I lost it after it went through the wash while in my pants (this is typical of me, by the way). SO, I'll have to start again. BUT IN THE MEANTIME! I wrote a Pronounciation Guide to help those of you who cannot pronounce half the names I made up. Don't worry...it's excusable. I also edited little bits and pieces in Chapter 1. THERE WERE SO MANY FRAGMENTS! But don't worry, I'm pretty sure I've edited it enough to be like 1 or 2 fragments now...if you see any more, PLEASE tell me! And to add yet another addition to this large update: I've given the pages a new look! The font's in Georgia (you have NO idea how long that took me to figure out...I'm SO stupid...) and I found out that I can make horizontal bars go across the page, so I've gone bar-happy, and you'll see MANY bars scattered across the pages...so I think that qualifies as putting a "version 2" after all the links!- Ice Bereaver

7/28/03: I started Chapter 2, and after loosing it two times, I figure, when I write it the third time, I'll just keep it here, so that I can't lose the bits and pieces on the site at least. I'll finish rewriting the rest later this week, hopefully! - Ice Bereaver

7/29/03: I spent FOUR hours on that picture you see above, and I'm SO happy! Now the site has a picture (of Ganalea! I didn't mention in the first chapter that Ganalea has blue hair, did I...oops...I'll do that later. Chapter 2 is coming along nicely. I'll probably add some more to that tomorrow. I'll be making a character bio page, and a world map page soon, which I hope will help with visualizing the island Neskof is on, and where the forests surrounding Zukabr are, as well as showing you what all my characters look like! So let's see...7 major characters, four hours on each, that' 28 hours...I should go now...- Ice Bereaver

7/30/03: I put up the last part of the first section of Chapter 2...I still need to put up three more sections (One with Thorn & his aunt and uncle, and another with Deranda and Kriska). I'm working on more pics which take SOOO long, but they turn out well, so it's worth it! I'll put up more later! - Ice Bereaver

7/31/03: EEEWWWWWWWW!!! I spent 4 hours on THAT?? I doubt I can get it to look any better, but I guess that will have to do as the picture of Thorn. I'll try to make a better one soon, cuz that one's pretty...bad...Sorry about that. ANYWAY! You should all join (look at the bottom of the page) cuz I'm going to e-mail people every THURSDAY (*update* I will not e-mail you that often...there is not that much to say...maybe once a month...) about updates with the site and all, so sign up! It's basically a more indepth...this...what I'm doing now...updating you on what's happening. AND! I just added a Message Forum (about 3 seconds ago), so you can find it (above where you join the Mailing List) and just post messages! Whoa...i feel IMPORTANT!! YAY! The World Map should be done tomorrow, so that'll be good! Wait...I mean, today, but seeing as it's 1 in the morning, it'll SEEM like tomorrow...- Ice Bereaver

8/3/03: I put the story onto Fiction Press (see the link) So now I have more room for pics and stuff! And feel free to use the message board! (besides Jess) - Ice Bereaver

8/7/03: CHAPTER 2 IS FINALLY DONE!!! but...FictionPress.com is being STUPID and won't let me upload it...saying it's not uploading correctly (which I AM going...it IS correct) but FictionPress remains stupid...so can't get it up...FOR NOW! But don't worry...I'll get it up...I'm in a period mood...gotta love those periods... - I.c.e. B.e.r.e.a.v.e.r

8/12/03: FICTION PRESS ISN'T STUPID ANYMORE! Yes, Chapter 2, the longest yet, is done, and I've written a page of chapter three. I'll finish three while I'm on vacation next week, so expect it on...the...28th-ish...about that! And if I DON'T get it by then, someone (Monique, preferably...you have a connection with Ralph...) sick my cat on me as inspiration! - Ice Bereaver

Story:

Other:

Pronounciation Guide (v. 2)

COMING SOON: World Map

COMING SOON: Character Bios

If you have any comments on this story, or editions (plot problems, grammer, etc.), all critiques are welcome! E-mail me (please) and don't forget to put Ganalea in the subject...or else I might delete it along with all my other spam mail..

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